Revision

Look over the following links about revision. Read over your group's mission statement and check it for clarity, wordiness, and grammar. When you are all satisfied, print out your document and hand it in along with your memos. For homework, read over the links on revision. Once I give you in information you are responsible for it and your understanding of the reading material needs to show up in the work you are doing. When you come back to class on Thursday, we will do an in class practice revision.

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/648/1/

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/648/02/

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/648/03/

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/648/04/

DON'T FORGET: FOR THURSDAY PLEASE BRING IN A HOUSEHOLD OR  ELECTRONIC ITEM, YOUR FAVORITE SANDWICH INGREDIANCE, OR WHATEVER ELSE YOU WANT TO USE, TO PRACTICE WRITING TECHNICAL INSTRUCTIONS.